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9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:07 pm
by cirquemom
Link to Chapter 8: Bonnie meets Pinky and Omi:
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The first weekend in September in The Doll House.

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Prima: Bonnie, I need you to bring me your duffle bag from school.


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Bonnie: Why?
Prima: I need to wash all the dirty laundry in it.


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Prima: Hello, is this Miss Sturnbothem's School for Girls? This is Prima Dauhl.


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Prima: I'm Bonnie Dauhl's sister and legal guardian. I'd like to speak to Miss Sturnbothem about the upcoming school term.


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Prima: We haven't received her informational packet with the dates and such. Oh....she wants to speak with me? Yes, I'll be here later. Yes, she can call me here. Thank you!


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Bonnie: Here's my duffel bag....


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Prima: Bonnie! What a lot of stuff!


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9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:08 pm
by cirquemom
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Prima: This isn't yours!


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Prima: It feels like there's something else in here...


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Prima: What the heck?


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Prima: How on earth did this get in there???


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Prima: Okay, Bonnie. Hop up into the chair. It's time to cut that blue out of your hair.
Bonnie: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!


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Bonnie: Why are you cutting my hair? Nooooooo!!!!! *sobs*
Prima: Now Bonnie...


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Prima: This is why I didn't want you to dye your hair blue. You know Miss Sturnbothem's School for Girls does not allow colored hair.
Bonnie: I HATE THAT SCHOOL! I DON'T WANT TO GO BACK!!! I WANT TO STAY HERE WITH YOUUUUUUU.....*sob*


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Phone: RIIIIIIIIING!!!! RIIIIIING!!!!


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Prima: Hello? Yes, this is Prima Dauhl.

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:08 pm
by cirquemom
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Prima: Hello, Miss Sturnbothem. I called because we haven't received our packet for the new school year yet, and I need to know when Bonnie has to be back.


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Prima: Oh, how awful........Really?.........How terrible!........I'm so sorry to hear that.........Yes, of course..........Yes. Well, thank you for calling me back, Miss Sturnbothem....Yes.... Good-bye.


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Prima: Wow, that's odd. School has been cancelled this fall.


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Prima: Remember last winter when you had to come home because the school flooded and everything froze? Well, apparently they discovered that it looks like one of the students somehow managed to open up the pipes in the basement. That's what caused the flood. The damage is so extensive that the repairs to the school still aren't finished.


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Bonnie: How odd...


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End of story. Thanks for looking!

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:18 pm
by K2!
That's lucky.

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:25 pm
by SetsunaKou
Awesome! That was soooo cute! And so realistic!! I really could hear them speaking in my head and you even managed to capture expression from ALL of them! Even the background characters were adding to the story!

I love the ending!

Great job! Great props and great photography!!!!

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:48 pm
by Princess_Sarah_Em
Sneaky little girl. I love it.

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:03 pm
by BlackDragoon
I love the scene where everyone just stares quietly at the wrench. Yes, how did that happen I wonder?

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:33 pm
by Iwa_Hoshi
cirquemom wrote:Bonnie: How odd...


Bonnie looks a bit evil in this shot. But she's so cute.

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:36 pm
by Gift_in_Edge
*Twilight Zone music* Does this mean home school? :)

Re: 9. The Doll House: Monkey Wrench

PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:23 pm
by Greyhaunt
Personally, I hate to think what is going to happen when Alice comes back. The last thing you needed there was TWO devious young women! I can see those two competing in naughtiness.